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Showing posts with label Feedback. Show all posts

Monday, 1 February 2016

My Film - Progress Check

"Nicola, your blogging so far has been generally thorough, well written and expressed using appropriate terminology throughout - well done. However, it has slipped a little since you went into production, which I’m sure you’re aware of. So far there is little evidence of all the hard work you have done on your film opening. i would have expected to see your pitch, screenplay, storyboard, photography of your locations, and a production diary detailing how each shoot went. You should also be adding rough cuts and edits, so that there is a clear progression shown through your blog. I’m sure you’ll get on top of this and I understand that you have been away over christmas; I also know it’s easy to get carried away with the production itself, but just don’t neglect the evidence to go alongside it."


Completed
  • Pitch (edited, posted onto my Youtube channel, and my blog.)
  • Screenplay (written, and posted on my blog.)
  • Storyboard (hand drawn, and posted on my blog.)
  • Location Scout (photos posted on my blog.)
  • Production Diary (up to date, posted on blog.)
  • Rough Cut (posted onto my Youtube channel, and my blog.)

To Do
  • Compile and edit together the footage of my opening by 3rd Feb (complete)
  • Record voices for the dub-over by 5th Feb (complete)
  • Create soundscape for my opening by 12th Feb (complete)

Monday, 28 September 2015

Blog Improvements

"Bunny and The Bull"
  • Gave the post a title.
  • Added an image (of promotion for the film) to the post. 
  • Uploaded screenshots of my analyses of 3 screenshots from the the film ("Bunny and The Bull".)

Analysis of "This is England"
  • Rounded off the monetary figures to millions.
  • Added links to other websites to allow readers to gain more information.
  • Added a link to the source.
  • Added images.

Semiotics in Action 
  • Changed the text size to normal.
  • Highlighted key terminology.
  • Corrected Spelling.

The History of Working Title
  • Added a source.
  • Added an image.
  • Added links.

Analysis of "Nanny McPhee"
  • Added an image to anchor the setting.
  • Commented on the significance of a PG rating.
  • Added more information.
  • Briefly analysed the income.

The Prelim Task
  • Attempted to add an example of a previous prelim (however, I was unsuccessful in finding one.)