My Film - Mimitís (Version 2/Rough Cut 3)

For this cut of my film I spent ages combing through Logic Pro's various pre-recorded sound loops, even dabbling in recording some of my own original content using Alchemy, but I found great difficulty in getting the correct timing to create the tension and buildup I was looking for. 
I think I'd like to make the sound grungier in the next cut, to see if that will improve the tension.